Looking back at your
preliminary task, what do you feel you have learnt in the progression from it
to the full product?
I
feel I have drastically developed as a filmmaker from completing my preliminary
task to my final production; my preliminary task was quite effective as we
included everything that was required, but we encountered some problems like
poor lighting which led to further problems such as the actors being difficult
to see clearly, this damaged the way our video looked which made it look less
attractive to our audience. We identified this as a problem so we set out to
improve this in our final production.
The shot on the left is from
our preliminary task and the shot on the right is from our final production;
there’s a significant difference in the quality of lighting; we added a dark
effect onto our final production and it was set outside and the light quality
is still better than our prelim task, this shows that we took great care in
improving the lighting as our feedback from prelim identified it as the main
problem, this also highlights the great progression that we made. This adds
greatly to the effectiveness of our final production as it shows that we
improved on the flaws of our prelim to create an exciting thriller with much
enriched lighting; however we still encountered many problems with lighting as
we shot every scene outside so we were reliant on good weather conditions to
ensure the lighting was proficient. The lighting could have also led to
continuity issues as we shot at several locations on different days; continuity
was one of the main issues we faced with our prelim so we identified this as something
we had to get right with our final production, with which we did meritoriously.
A strongpoint of our prelim
is that we included many different shot types which made it more interesting by
making each shot different from the next; we saw this was effective so we
expanded on this by including more ambitious shots whilst we also kept cutting
back to the oncoming train. We did this because our feedback told us that our
differentiation of shots in our prelim was one of the best features so we
decided to manipulate our strongpoints to ensure we get the best final
production possible.
Here’s an example of the
unique shots we included; this shot is effective as the high angle shot
highlights the dominance of power held by the male protagonist. This shows
great progression from our prelim as we only really included basic medium and
close-up shots, we never attempted anything as ambitious as this.
Another way in which we
greatly improved from our prelim is with continuity, as we filmed our final
production in numerous locations at different dates we had to take every
precaution to ensure we maintained continuity. We encountered no problems with
continuity in our final production as the weather was the same on all days we
filmed and we ensured our actors maintained their continuity, however we did
have some problems with continuity in our prelim.
This is a screen grab from
our prelim highlighting a continuity issue we had when performing the match on
action shot as we didn’t edit it correctly so the actors hand appeared to move
jittery. We identified this as a problem so we sought to rectify it by ensuring
we edited profusely throughout our final production.
As continuity issues led to
many problems arising in our prelim, we used a technique of exploiting the many
oncoming train shots we had to hide any minor continuity issues editing
couldn’t prevent. This proceeded to be a very effective technique as it vastly
improved the continuity from our prelim as well as adding to the overall tension
of the production; something of which our prelim was significantly lacking in,
but our prelim didn’t have to abide by a specific genre so maintaining high
levels of tension wasn’t essential.
My editing skills have
increased momentously from the prelim production as I have learnt how to
effectively follow the 180 degree rule and abide by the golden mean, as well as
this I’ve learnt how to edit effectively by ensuring continuity is maintained;
I have done this by making sure the film is a smooth, slick final production.
Another way in which we
significantly improved was with the way we planned in our final production, we carried
out extensive research and planning to ensure our final production fitted our
consumers’ needs as well as making sure we followed our plan thoroughly.
This is an example of the
planning that we did for our final production, we extensively researched our
location to establish whether it was suitable or not, on the other hand we
carried out no research into the location of our preliminary task. We also
carried out planning into all aspects of our final production, such as:
costume, props, etc. we learnt from our prelim that little planning can have a
detrimental effect on the final production so we used this as motivation to
ensure that our planning was of the highest quality; we scrupulously planned
every little part of our thriller so we knew who would be doing what and what
was happening on each day of filming.
We
also visited the locations beforehand to give us an idea if they would be
suitable for our production, the mood board above indicates how much attention
to detail we paid as we scrutinised every detail adroitly. This is something we
didn’t do with our prelim; we only ever saw our location when we filmed, and we
realised that it wouldn’t be wholly suitable, but our poor planning ensured
that we couldn’t change it; this is one of the main motivations for our
detailed planning.
Another
way we improved from our preliminary task was with the way that we effectively
used sound to extrapolate the effect that we wanted to create and effectively
replicate this new found use of sound to build tension and suspense, whilst
also keeping the audience captivated. In our prelim we just had one train
overlaying everything which was ‘The Eye of The Tiger’ with a small bit of
dialogue intertwined; we realised this is very basic and sought to improve this
in our final production by using a more complex mix of sounds. We used a slow,
chilling piece of music composed by a renown thriller music producer, we also
introduced a narration of a poem halfway through called ‘Cousin Kate’, we used
this poem as an inspiration for our whole production which is signified by our
choice of title: ‘Kate’s Revenge’. This narration shows that we can use new
aspects that are rarely used in thriller productions, this also makes ours more
unique than the typical thriller, we have also drastically expanded on our
minimalistic prelim ideas by introducing ideas that are more controversial than
anything our prelim included.


































