Connor - overall your blog shows good levels of planning and research to create an engaging thriller.You must explain why you've put on each post. I can't read any of the writing underneath the shots - it will need altering.Is there anything else you could say about the shots? What effect were your group trying to convey?You might want to add some peer evaluations of your production and then use this to think about your development in the evaluation.
Connor - overall your blog shows good levels of planning and research to create an engaging thriller.
ReplyDeleteYou must explain why you've put on each post. I can't read any of the writing underneath the shots - it will need altering.
Is there anything else you could say about the shots? What effect were your group trying to convey?
You might want to add some peer evaluations of your production and then use this to think about your development in the evaluation.